lawFX's Reviews

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Awkward transitions bro. You gotta make 'em flow! pffft.

Looks like we got another potential trance artist here. I seriously recommend having a main theme for your song. At the moment, all I hear are arpeggios and a few stabs and a bass. That's stuff is for goa man. You gotta have a chord progression here. You also got to watch out for too much release on your instruments/pads. They muffle your track. Also, make your bass more powerful than it is, but not too much.

Listen to the pros for learning out to make better transitions. you have a few off things in there too.

'Neways, cool stuff. I make trance too -- maybe check 'em out? I hate asking to but it seems to be the only way to get exposure around here now.

Thanks man. Peace.

Pulsar013 responds:

Duude - Im super sorry - this track I started -and was like "yeah!" one night - and then the next I was thinking " y the heck did i submit this?", u feel. And yeah this is some sucky work really - but thanx for the review - be sure to check out my remix once its done - OH and Ill def - look for out for u - I think ive already heard some of yer stuff. ( I admit - It did sound goa - BUT IF freakin programers would hurry up and let me delete this - I wouldnt have my name being sullied)

[Acolyte of Venus]

Pretty sick. I remember you from a while back - I have some song on a CD that was made by you a few years ago. Haha. Glad to see your still around.

My only complaint is that the bass has no bass. You need to EQ them moar bro. Blah.

Good stuff. I make hard trance too, you should totalllly check em out. x.x

Peace.

[the perseverance of down]

Turn off the release on your bass. (Delay, reverb, whatever it is). Once that is done, bring out the drums more. Make sure the kick has its low frequencies cut off a little bit. The synth also needs to have its low frequencies cut off. This will help with your muddy mix and it will make your bass more powerful. ALSO, be sure to turn off any limiters on your master channel. I know you use fruity loops. :3

Cool rhythmic stuff man. Voted 4/5.

johnfn responds:

Thank you, this is very helpful. Sometime in the near future I'm going to figure this stuff out once and for all. My problem is that I can't really hear the muddiness until someone points it out to me. Something to work on. Thanks again.