Awkward transitions bro. You gotta make 'em flow! pffft.

Looks like we got another potential trance artist here. I seriously recommend having a main theme for your song. At the moment, all I hear are arpeggios and a few stabs and a bass. That's stuff is for goa man. You gotta have a chord progression here. You also got to watch out for too much release on your instruments/pads. They muffle your track. Also, make your bass more powerful than it is, but not too much.

Listen to the pros for learning out to make better transitions. you have a few off things in there too.

'Neways, cool stuff. I make trance too -- maybe check 'em out? I hate asking to but it seems to be the only way to get exposure around here now.

Thanks man. Peace.

Pretty sick. I remember you from a while back - I have some song on a CD that was made by you a few years ago. Haha. Glad to see your still around.

My only complaint is that the bass has no bass. You need to EQ them moar bro. Blah.

Good stuff. I make hard trance too, you should totalllly check em out. x.x

Peace.

Turn off the release on your bass. (Delay, reverb, whatever it is). Once that is done, bring out the drums more. Make sure the kick has its low frequencies cut off a little bit. The synth also needs to have its low frequencies cut off. This will help with your muddy mix and it will make your bass more powerful. ALSO, be sure to turn off any limiters on your master channel. I know you use fruity loops. :3

Cool rhythmic stuff man. Voted 4/5.